Thursday, 10 December 2015

PRESSURE FIRST THING



not yet dawn 
and
the 
moon
is an unfinished hangnail 
muscling into my solitude
and
calling my bluff 
before
i've
even
had
coffee 
 

 from bandagedear.com
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 December 2015 at 09:28

    Economically poetic description of my current state. Thanks. Joseph Hargraves

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  2. ford dagenham10 December 2015 at 10:34

    me too ! thanks for reading again. great to get a positive comment five minutes after writing a poem and posting it.

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