out for a bacon sarnie
in
the nowhere jobless hours
of
a
blank cafe morning
where
time is still finding its AM stride
in
the grey daylight stumble
of
white noise
left over
from
night and dreams
that rings in my ears
like
the church bells
of the godless faithful
workmen in stained joggers
place long take-out orders
and
a
clot of fishwives bark clipped sentences
about implants with implied judgement
their
miserable faces pecking at paninis
like small troubled birds
i
half
recognise them
from
some job
i had
somewhere
from favim.com
I like the line-breaks, indentation, consonance, and ragged accuracy of being stuck with memory of dream. Really conveyed the feel of a rough morning - I could smell the day. Excellent. Joseph Hargraves
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